想幹好久好久了
終於立定決心把小琳這麼多年的作品給整理一下
(其實也就是一,兩年罷了)
我在"相簿"裏開了新的檔案夾放小琳的作品
大家隔一段時間可以進去看看
然後我再把其中某些稍稍精彩的放進"日記"裏稍加解釋
希望我能堅持下去吧!
先看看小琳今天自己寫的一篇故事
(她常常自己寫故事)
因為她愛用鉛筆的緣故
所以拍得不太清楚
我在下面再用電腦打出來以便記錄
為了尊重版權
錯別字也會按照原著如實刊登
不再加更正版本了
大家自己猜測正確的用字吧 (除非錯得太離譜)
因她還不太會用標點符號
我只幫她加進一些基本的逗號和句號和分段以方便閱讀
書名: Stephenie's dog Fluffy
Level 22
內容:
Onec a point a time, there was a girl called Stephenie. She had a big big
dog called fluffy. he is aways naughty. Evertime he barks and barks WO!WO!
WO!WO! Stephenie stops him in a loud voice.
She said stop! Stop! but Fluffy still barks this time. He barks louder.
Stephenie shouts stop, you are so noisy!! She shouts and shouts but he still
barks. She shout Getout, you bad bad dog!!! She pushed and pushed and
pushed. She goes sees him in her Garden eatting her carrots, and she throws
him into the back yeard.
One day it was Stephenie's birthday, her frinds all came. Her dog barks
and barks. What a bad dog, said one. I'm sared of dogs, said another.
Get out Get out of the party! She shout. She push and push. I need your
help she said. They push and push.
Hey it still not work, we need our parunts said Angela. MaMa would help us?
BaBa would you help us? Sue they shout. Stephenie had to push the outhers
pull. They pushed and pull and pushed and pull. Hooray! we did it!
The parunts came in. They ate a peace of cake and play some games.
The games are: londen bridge, pas the ball, the wells on the bus, hang Man,
and drawing on the bord and pant a picture.
Then they weant to a beach. They made some sand castles some sand hats.
Lucy and Judy want to swim but they don't know to swim. Helen ran to safe
Lucy and Judy. Help!! Help!! Where is the Help sound comeing from? ask
Helena. Oh she floght ma by (thought may be) its Lucy and Judy. She goes to
the water and save them. The outhers helped. It is time to take a bath
said Stephenie. Time to go! Bye!
This story is telling about a girl and her scarrd dog. Are you scarrd
of this story?
