小琳一向寫的文章我都覺得內容有些無聊
但今天她寫的日記
另我真有點刮目相看
讓讀者閱讀的同時
完完全全感受得到她扔豆袋之前的緊張心情
扔中目標時的激動和站在隊友面前的自豪
就是結尾還差一點點
我真的覺得她這篇文章寫得不錯
值得誇獎
At P.E. lesson, we all had beanbag-throwing games. We were in six groups to play. I was in group 5 with Rin, Angali, Crispina, Janice and Avneek. Every person has two chances to play and need to throw beanbags into a hula-hoop.
The teacher blew her whistle and I held my breath as the game started and Rin ran to throw her beanbag for the first time. Rin threw her beanbag. Up...it went and down it fell...but it was not in the hoop! Rin had to run back and Angali took her beanbag and ran. All three girls before me did not reach the hoop.
After Crispina came back, I ran to throw my bag. To my amazement, I did a perfect shoot and my beanbag went right into the hoop! I ran back to my group, feeling proud and happy when I was in front of my teamates. My teamates were all beaming and clapping and cheering for me, and after Janice's bad shot, she came to us and she, Crispina and I talked about our results. "I didn't do it well," said Janice breathlessly. "But I did!" I cried. "Thank goodness, I almost forgot!" breathed Janice squeezing me a hug. Janice then said:"I squeezed your life out of you. So you're dead." I said no and I can still move. Then I elbowed Janice "Imagine you are dead. Can you move?" I asked Janice. Janice & Crispina just didn't know what to say.
