（題目 Writing write a short paragraph about something you enjoy ding. Describe what you do and how it makes you feel.)
哥哥寫的文章
I like to play video games.Will is big and white、new 、shiry.I like p.s. too .PS is small、new、coll. Ps is lots of fun. Ps can put other kinds of things. I like to play with my friends. But my mom doesn't let me play. But ,somebody don't like to play. I know all the vedio games. Sometime you need to start again. IFyou lost youhave many chances in will.
我將文章拿給爸爸過目，爸爸說哥哥後面有點亂寫。我跟爸爸說「哥哥寫I like to play with my friends. But my mom doesn't let me play.這樣好像是我不讓他跟同學玩，但他想要表達的意思，應該是我不讓他玩電動啊。還寫的一副懂很多電動的樣子」
爸爸馬上回我「因為你不讓他玩電動，他一寫到這裡，心裡難過，後面就亂寫了。所以這個星期開始，我們來玩電動吧」
厚，什麼跟什麼啊。電動當然還是不准囉！
