題目: Story Writing: Blast Off !
Story Writing tells a fictional tale with a beginning, a middle, and an end. A story has a plot, characters, and settings.
Imagine that you can travel to one of the outer planets.
Before you begin with writing, choose a planet and think about what facts you know about it.
Now write a story about your journey and what you found. Be creative !
It was a long flight to my destination. As I landed on the surface ......
以下是 Sean's writing ---
It was a long flight to my destination. As I landed on the surface of Jupiter, I saw storms coming from all directions heading towards me. Suddenly, BOOM ! Most storms just disappeared and gas spread out. Of course ! Jupiter was a gas planet.
I went inside my storage room and get out equipments from my rocket ship. When all equipments were packed, I carefully stepped on the surface of Jupiter. The place was huge. Of course, Jupiter was the largest planet in the galaxy. Thinking about Jupiter, it was also the Roman lord of the sky. He was also the king god. That might be why Jupiter is so huge.
As I walked across Jupiter, storms kept hurling themselves at me. A past few days and nights I camped. I thought, "What if I can't get back to my rocket?" Trying not to think about it, I looked at the moons of Jupiter. There are a lot of moons, 63 to be exact unless more is found.
One really stormy day, I came across a huge area where storms raged and charged at each other like wild bulls. This place was way different from all the other areas I came across. Suddenly, it occured to me, The Great Red Spot ! It was partly famous because the place was red. It has the most storms and is twice the size of Earth.
When I saw the storms come after me, I ran as fast as I could. Suddenly, I felt my legs leave the ground. I was in the air on a storm ! But my happiness ended quickly when I dropped down. I dropped from about 6 yards in the air ! THUMP !!! I crashed on my arm so it was broken. I got to my rocket 2 weeks and 5 days after my beginning of the trip. I almost mended my arm successfully so I blasted off back to Earth. My space jouney ended there, but more adventures will come in the future.
