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Moca the Mouse by Chip

2010年03月08日
作者小檔案:
Chip
國小四年級

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週2小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:兩年多

故事創作背景:閱讀完Danny and the Dinosaur之後,運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。

批改故事原則:只提示較明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Moca the Mouse
Written by Chip
Illustrated by Chip

Once upon a time, there was a mouse, named Moca, and a cat, who lived inside a house.
Moca the Mouse by Chip_img_1

One day, the cat saw a sign. It said, "Cats always eat mice." But the cat thought, " Moca is my best friend. I can't eat him." Then he went back to his house and patted Moca.
Moca the Mouse by Chip_img_2

The next day, Moca asked the cat, " Do you want to eat cheese?" "Oh," said the cat, "nobody wants to eat that. Hey! Do you want a pet bird?" "Yes," said Moca. " Take me to the pet shop. Can you take me for a ride?" The cat said, " Ok! Hold on tight!"
Moca the Mouse by Chip_img_3

They went to the pet shop and bought a bird and put it in the mouse hole. They were very happy!