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Owl's Pet by Chip

2010年03月26日
作者小檔案:
Chip
國小四年級

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週2小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:兩年多

故事創作背景:閱讀完Happy Birthday, Danny and the Dinosaur之後,運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。

批改故事原則:只提示較明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Owl's Pet
Written by Chip
Illustrated by Chip

Owl's Pet by Chip_img_1
One day, Owl wants a pet. He wants his pet is a million years old and can help him hang up the balloons. So he goes to the pet shop.

In the pet shop, he sees dogs, cats, lambs...and he sees a dinosaur. He asks the dinosaur, "Can you be my pet?" The dinosaur said," I will be delighted." So he buys the dinosaur.

Owl's Pet by Chip_img_2
When they go home, Owl blows up the balloons and the dinosaur hangs up the balloons and they have a party.

The end.