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Polar Bear by Chip

2010年04月09日
作者小檔案:
Chip
國小四年級

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週2小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:兩年多

故事創作背景:閱讀完What Will Little Bear Wear?之後,運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。

批改故事原則:只提示較明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Polar Bear
Written by Chip
Illustrated by Chip

Polar Bear by Chip_img_1
One day Polar Bear makes an icehouse and takes his fur coat, snow pants to the icehouse. He wants to catch fish to eat, so he goes to the sea to catch some fish back to his icehouse, and he goes to sleep.

The next day, he wonders why he has a pair of eyes, but he has no answer. One day he finds a book. It says, "All animals have two eyes because they can help us to see." Polar Bear says, "Hurray!"

The end.