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Go To Ashley's House by Arielle

2010年07月19日
作者小檔案:
Arielle
國小四年級

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週2小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:一年多

故事創作背景:閱讀完Birthday Soup之後,運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。

批改故事原則:只提示拼字錯誤,保留孩子的原創性。

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Go To Ashley's House
Written and Illustrated by Arielle

One day I eat my breakfast. "Oh! You forget to go to Ashley's house," my mom shouts. First, I call Ashley and tell her, "Now I will go to your house." Next, I ran to her house. "Wait! You forget to get your breakfast," shout my mom, so I get my breakfast and run to Ashley's house.

I open the door and shut the door. I smell something good to eat. I see a big black pot, but there is nothing in the pot. Ashley comes home, and she goes to her room and says, "Shut your eyes, ok you can open your eyes." "Wow! Soup! It smells good," I shout. Ashley and I eat the soup. "Time to go home," I said. "I will never forget you, my friend." I said.

At last I go home, and I am very happy today.

The end.