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Summary 5 - The Magic Key

2011年08月03日
作者小檔案:
Dora, Andy, Winnie 小一;Rice 大班

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Summary (摘要) 書寫方式:孩子閱讀故事並討論,然後將故事改成四格圖畫故事,把故事大意寫下來。

老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份,不在乎文法錯誤、或文意是否銜接,先讓孩子勇敢地學習用自己的方式去敘述他們對這個故事的理解。


***********未經修改的孩子的Summary書寫**************

1. Rice's summary

Biff picks up the key and the magic begins.
Biff and Chip get smaller and smaller. Everything looks big.
The house is big. The windows are glowing.
Biff and Chip get bigger and bigger and bigger. The magic takes them back to Biff's room.
Summary 5 - The Magic Key_img_1

2. Dora's summary

The box is glowing. Chip runs into Biff's room. It's a magic key! Biff and Chip get smaller and smaller.
Everything looks big. They look at the house. It looks big. The windows are glowing.
She pushes and pushes the door, but she cannot open it. Chip pulls and pulls the window, but he cannot open it.
Biff and Chip get bigger and bigger and bigger. The magic takes them back to Biff's room.
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3. Winnie's summary

The box is by Chip's bed. Something is glowing inside it.
Biff and Chip look at the box. They open the box. They look inside. The key is the box is glowing.
Biff and Chip get smaller and smaller. Everything looks big. Chip picks up big pencil. Biff picks up a big pin.
Something is coming. Chip picks up the pin. "Oh help!" he says. It is a mouse. Biff gets the magic key. Then they get bigger and bigger.
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4. Andy's summary

The box is by Chips bed. Something is glowing inside it.
Chip picks up the key and the magic begins. Biff and Chip get smaller and smaller.
Something is coming. Biff and Chip look at the mouse. Something is glowing. It is the magic key.
Biff and Chip get bigger and bigger.
Summary 5 - The Magic Key_img_4