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The fire baby by Dale

2011年06月24日
作者小檔案:
Dale 小三

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週1小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。

故事創作:使用學到的新詞做故事創作。

老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。


**********孩子的書寫**************

The fire baby by Dale

There was the baby crying. His mother took the baby to see his father. The baby said, "I want to play my toy." The father answered, "Ok." The baby smiled. Then the flame began. The baby learned. The baby shot the water at the flame. The baby walk quietly to the park. The baby slid down the slide. Suddenly one boy kicked the baby and said "Sorry." The baby climbed the slide and fell down. He said, "I must try again." But his father took him home. The end.