作者小檔案:
Dale 小四
目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。
Summary書寫:閱讀Leveled Reader之後,改寫成短篇文章。
老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。
**********孩子的書寫**************
Little Bear by Dale
Little Bear wanted to go to the moon. He climbed a little tree and jumped. He thought he was on the moon. He said, "The bird looks like our bird. The tree looks like our tree."
Little Bear went to the house and said, "This house looks like our house." Little Bear went into the house. Then he saw Mother Bear. He said, "I am your Little Bear." Mother Bear said, "Yes!"
The End.