作者小檔案:
Dale 小四
目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。
故事創作:利用學到的新字詞書寫故事。
老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。
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My Friend By Dale
My Friend is ten years old. His mother is a housewife. His father is a police officer. He likes to ride his bike.
One day I visited my friend. He wished he were a dog. I wished I were a cat. He said he wanted to be a lion tamer. I said I wanted to be a doctor.
Then he made cookies. I helped him. We liked eating cookies and talking. Then it was time to go home and I ran home.
The End