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Picnic By Mina

2012年10月04日
作者小檔案:
Mina
國小一年級

目前參加課程:故事與閱讀每週兩小時. Fun Time每週一小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:四年多

故事創作方式:閱讀之後,請孩子自由創作。

批改故事原則:提示明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Picnic

One day Hanna and Lizy are going to the park. They invite their friends. Hanna wants a picnic. Tina wants to make a cake. But she has no flour. But Kally does. Kally wants to make cookies. But she has no butter. But Lizy does. They had fun. The end.

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