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Michelle_小蜜

Boring Day by Mina

2012年12月20日
作者小檔案:
Mina
國小一年級

目前參加課程:故事與閱讀每週兩小時. Fun Time每週一小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:2008年~至今

故事創作方式:閱讀之後,請孩子自由創作。

批改故事原則:提示明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Boring Day by Mina

One day Bella and Lina are in their house. "I am bored," says Lina. "Me too," says Bella. "Let's go to the fun park," says Mom. "Yes!" say the twins. They go to the fun park. They go on the jumping castle. But a sign in the middle of the castle says, "No pets." They don't see the sign. So the twins see their cat. Her name is Kit. The cat goes on the bus. Kit goes on the jumping castle. A man sees it. "Go home," says the man. They go home and Lina says, "I am bored."

The End

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