The First Day of School by Mina

作者小檔案：
Mina
國小一年級

目前參加課程：故事與閱讀每週兩小時. Fun Time每週1小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：2008~recent

故事創作方式：請孩子寫一個生活故事。

批改故事原則：提示明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性，保護他們的書寫勇氣。

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The First Day of School
By Mina

One day I go to school. But when I got to the classroom, I felt a little scared.

The teacher takes me to my seat. I sit in front of a girl. She asks me my name. I tell her and she tells me hers. The girl's name was Emily. We play together.

When the teacher knows Mom don't need to work, she tells Mom to sit in front of the computer. I don't know why.

The End

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