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Harry By Dale

2012年04月20日
作者小檔案:
Dale 小四

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀\"每週一小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀\"課程。

Summary書寫:閱讀Leveled Reader之後,改寫成短篇文章。

老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。


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Harry
By Dale

Harry was a dog. He loved his neighbors, except one. He did not love the lady next door because his ear was hurt. One day, Harry ’s house had a party. They invited the lady next door. Harry bit the leg of the piano instead. The family sent Harry out. Then the wind blew the pages. Harry got some pages. Then he lay down and slept.

Then Harry had an idea. He barked at the cows. The cows went to Harry ‘s house. Harry stopped the cows and the cows mooed. But it did not do any good. That night Harry slept in the dog house.

Harry heard the pig born. He caught the stick and ran to the lady ’s house. The band was singing. But it did not do any good. That night, Harry slept in the dog house.

A few nights after that, the family took Harry to the park to listen to the big horn. The man come out and said “ The big horn player is all out of breath, so we have a singing contest.” Harry saw the lady next door and he ran away. Then Harry saw the frog in the watering can, so Harry took the handle to the contest. He put the watering can behind the lady next door. The frogs jump out, but the lady next door still singing. The lady next door won. She could go far away to learn music. Soon the lady next door went.

The end.