作者小檔案：
Andy, Dora, Winnie 國小一年級
Rice 大班
目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時
從聽故事開始，進入"故事與閱讀"課程一年。
故事創作過程：接力說故事、寫故事、畫故事，孩子們故意寫了些silly sentences，然後笑得很開心，你能找到那些笑點嗎？（今天Dora請假，沒有參與說故事。）
***********未經修改的孩子的原創故事**************
The Tree House
by Andy, Winnie and Rice
Floppy runs to a tree house. The children like the tree house. Chip sits on a chair. Mom climbs the tree. Dad jumps up the tree. "Be careful!" says Chip. Kipper likes a cake. Biff pulls the house. The children jump down. "Oh no!" says Dad. Floppy likes the bones. Everyone likes the house.
The End.
April 7th, 2011
***********老師的建議（針對故事內容，不改文法）**************
The Tree House
by Andy, Winnie and Rice
Floppy runs to a tree house. The children like the tree house.
They climb up the tree. Chip sits on a chair. Mom climbs the tree. Dad jumps up the tree. "Be careful!" says Chip.
Kipper sees a cake. He likes the cake. Biff pulls the house. The children jump down. "Oh no!" says Dad.
Floppy finds some bones. He likes the bones. Everyone likes the house.
The End.
