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Old King Cole by Dale

2011年01月12日
作者小檔案:
Dale 小三

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Old King Cole by Dale

Old King Cole was happy because he saw a unicorn laughing. The queen smiled because she saw a dragon laughing. The Old King Cole laughed and I laughed because the Old King Cole was very very silly. He sat on the chair and he saw the joker. The Old King Cole laughed and laughed. I am sad because the Old King Cole was very noisy. The end.