作者小檔案：
Dora, Andy, Winnie 小一；Rice 大班
目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時
3-4歲開始在故事喵聽故事，99年春季進入"故事與閱讀"課程。
Summary (摘要) 書寫方式：孩子閱讀故事並討論，然後將故事改成四格圖畫故事，把故事大意寫下來。
這是第二次書寫，老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份，不在乎文法錯誤、或文意是否銜接，先讓孩子勇敢地學習用自己的方式去敘述他們對這個故事的理解，而他們的書寫已經開始有不同的開頭和結尾了。
***********未經修改的孩子的Summary書寫**************
1. Andy's summary
A van comes to the house.
"What a lot of things!" says the man.
Biff says goodbye to her friend. Then they go to the new house.
but they are sorry, because the fish bowl is broken.
2. Winnie's summary
A van comes to the house. Chip looks at the van. "What a big van!" he says.
Mum and Dad help the man. They put things in the van. "What a lot of things!" says Dad.
"Good bye," say William and Wendy. "Good bye" says Biff. "Come and play soon."
They go to the house. "Oh no!" say Biff and Chip. They are sorry. "What a day!" they say.
3. Rice's summary
A van and man come to the house. Chip looks at the man.
The man look at the things. What a lot of things! says Man.
The man put heavy things in the van. Mum and Dad help the man.
The fish bowl was broken. They are sorry.
4. Dora's summary
A big van and big man come to the house. "Hi good morning" he says.
"What a lot of things!" he says. "This is heavy" says man.
"Goodbye friend" says Biff. Come and play soon.
"What a day" they say
