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Summary 1 - House for sale

2011年04月14日
作者小檔案:
Dora, Andy, Winnie 小一;Rice 大班

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週2小時
3-4歲開始在故事喵聽故事,99年春季進入"故事與閱讀"課程。

Summary (摘要) 書寫方式:孩子閱讀故事並討論,然後將故事改成四格圖畫故事,把故事大意寫下來。

這是孩子們第一次書寫,老師沒有做任何修正更動,孩子們剛開始會寫出跟討論時比較相關的內容,不太敢有自己的意見,不過老師還是希望孩子勇敢地用自己的方式去敘述他們對這個故事的理解。


***********未經修改的孩子的Summary書寫**************

1. Rice's summary

This house is for sale. Dad likes the house. Mum likes it too.
The children go up the stairs. They go to the sitting room and the bedroom.
The children go to the garden. They see the tree house.
Everyone likes the house. Floppy likes it, too.

看看Rice的作品和插畫

2. Dora's summary

This house is for sale. Dad and mum see the house.
The childen go up the stairs. Everyone likes the house.
They go in the sitting room. kipper jumps on the bed.
Everyone likes the house. Floppy likes it, too.

看看Dora的作品和插畫

3. Andy's summary

This house is for sale. Dad likes the house. Mom likes it, too.
The children go up the stairs. They go in the sitting-room and the bedroom.
The children go in the garden. They see a tree house.
Everyone likes the house. Floppy likes it, too.

看看Andy的作品和插畫

4. Winnie的作品已帶回家,沒有存檔。Sorry!