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Summary- Miss Nelson is back, By Chip

2012年03月16日
作者小檔案:
Chip
國小六年級

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:四年多

Summary寫作:看完繪本DVD"Miss Nelson is back",憑印象寫出短篇摘要。

批改故事原則:只提示較明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Miss Nelson was sick- I guess. She had to rest in her house for one week. So the school's principle came to teach the class 207. But their principle just taught them some boring things.

Then some kids dressed up like Miss Nelson, and lied to the principle. Miss not-real Nelson took the class 207 out to play. But they walked by Miss real Nelson's house. "Mmm," said Miss real Nelson, "Someone has to stop this."

The next day another person came to class 207. It was the Swamp! Miss Swamp taught them a lot of things. But the children was so tired. Then someone came in.

It was the principle. The principle told Miss Swamp someone wanted to meet her. Then Miss Swamp went out, and someone came in. It was Miss Nelson. The children said, "Hooray!"

The end.