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Art Class, By Dale

2012年03月09日
作者小檔案:
Dale 小四

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。

Summary寫作:看完繪本DVD "Caillou: A present for Mummy",憑印象寫出短篇摘要。

老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。

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It's a snowy day. Caillou went to school. But Mommy could not find her key. Then Caillou found the key in the shoes.

Then the snow was on the car. So Mommy could not drive the car. Then Caillou sat in Grandfather's car. In the school Caillou took off the coat, the hat and the shoes to Grandfather. Caillou went to the classroom. Then Grandfather went back to the house.

In the Art Class, Caillou wanted to make a sun. The sun was shining and the snow was melting. The sun was ok. Caillou picked up the sun. Then the sun was broken. So Caillou made a new sun. Then Caillou carefully picked up the sun and put it in the oven. Then the sun was cracked.

It was lunch time. Then the juice was on the sun. Leo said this looked just like sun glasses. So Caillou made sunglasses on the sun. Caillou came home and gave the sun to his Mommy. Mommy was happy.

The end.