作者小檔案:
Dale 小四
目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。
故事創作:請小朋友寫出一個生活經驗來說明Give or Get?
老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。
**********孩子的書寫**************
One day I had a new toy. Then I saw my friend. I wanted to give him my toy, but I wanted to play my new toy. So I didn't give him my toy.
On Friday, I went to his house. I played the toy with him. I ate cookies. I played happily and I went home.
He gave me his toy, so I thought I could give him my toy. Then we became best friends. So I thought giving is better.
The end.