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Michelle_小蜜

Oops! By Chip

2012年03月23日
作者小檔案:
Chip
國小六年級

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間:四年多

故事創作方式:課堂中自由創作30分鐘。

批改故事原則:只提示較明顯的文法錯誤,盡量不更動太多,保留孩子的原創性。

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Once upon a time, there was a boy called Oops. One day Oops went to school but... he shouted, "Oops! I forgot my lunch bag!" So he went home and took his lunch bag. Then he shouted again, "Oops! I'm late!" So he went to school.

He ran as fast as he could. But he fell on a bulletin board. "Oops," said Oops, " I'm late for the test!" He ran to school. But it was too late. The test was over, and he got an F minus.

"No!!!" he shouted, and he woke up. "Oops! It's just a dream!" he said. Then he walked around. He saw some fog. It got more and more and more. "No!!!" And he woke up again. " I had a dream in my dream! Mmm. That's funny!"

He looked at his clock. "Oops!" he shouted. On the clock it showed ten o'clock! He was late for three hours! "No!!!!!" he shouted. Then he went back to his dream.

The end.