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The Third Puppy By Dale

2012年03月23日
作者小檔案:
Dale 小四

目前參加課程:"故事與閱讀"每週一小時
小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。

故事創作方式:課堂中給題目,20分鐘自由創作。
Gert had three puppies. One of them was missing...

老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤,盡量不做太多更動,讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。


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One day Gert lost her third puppy. Then she saw he jumped on the bus. So Gert said, "Puppies, stay here!" She jumped on the bus. Then she saw the third puppy was in the car. So she jumped to the car too.

Gert saw the third puppy jumped into the garbage can and Gert jumped into the garbage can. Then the third puppy climbed up the townhouse. Gert was scared, but she climbed up the townhouse. Now Gert was on the top, but she couldn't saw the third puppy.

Now Gert was tired. So she slept on the townhouse. Then she woke up. Gert couldn't see the third puppy anywhere. Gert was sad. Then she saw the third puppy on her back. Gert was very happy. So Gert went to see her puppies and went home.

The end.