作者小檔案：
Mina
國小一年級
目前參加課程：故事與閱讀每週兩小時. Fun Time每週1小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：2008~recent
故事創作方式：閱讀完In the Garden這本書，請孩子寫一個跟Garden有關的生活故事。
批改故事原則：提示明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性，保護他們的書寫勇氣。
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In the Garden
By Mina
One day, me, Carah, Emma and Marley went into our school's secret garden. We all went in.
The garden is big. We walk and walk until Marley shouts "Ahhhh!" "It's only a spider!" I say.
"No! It's Kevin," says Carah. "Go away!" says Marley. "Let me try. I will scare him away." I say. "Go away or I will tell your teacher!" Kevin ran away. Then the bell ring. "Time to go!" says Emma.
The End
書寫作品與插畫展示在教室「孩子的作品」區
