作者小檔案：
Mina
國小一年級
目前參加課程：故事與閱讀每週兩小時. Fun Time每週1小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：2008~recent
故事創作方式：閱讀完The Outing這本書，請孩子寫一個跟outing有關的生活故事。
批改故事原則：提示明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性，保護他們的書寫勇氣。
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The Outing
By Mina
One day, my class goes to the museum. We look at different things.
There are masterpieces, and bones, and everything. "Don't run!" shouts the teacher. But it was too late, Hannah and Vicky run off. "Oh, dear!" shouts Valina.
"Hannah! Vicky!" shouts Kevin. "Shhhh, Kevin! Everyone will hear you, even the police!" I say. "What's wrong?" ask the police. "We have lost children," says Kate. "I found them!" I shout. "Time to go!" says the teacher.
The End
書寫作品與插畫展示在教室「孩子的作品」區
