Land of Dinosaurs By Mina

作者小檔案：
Mina
國小一年級

目前參加課程：故事與閱讀每週兩小時. Fun Time每週1小時
跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：2008~recent

故事創作方式：閱讀完Land of the dinosaurs這本書，請孩子寫一個跟dinosaur有關的故事。

批改故事原則：提示明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性，保護他們的書寫勇氣。

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Land of Dinosaurs
By Mina

One day, my class goes to our magic room.

The teacher told us to think what we will do if we had a dinosaur in our house. "Close your eyes to think." The bell rang. "Nap time!" said the teacher.

We all went to sleep. Me and Emily had a long dream. When we were napping, a big wind took us to the forest. A fairy told us, "This is all the witch's work. She turned your friends into dinosaurs. Then... "Mina, wake up!" shouted Nicky. "I know it's just a dream, and I'm glad it's just a dream.





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