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作者小檔案： Dale 小三 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週1小時 小一開始"故事與閱讀"課程。 故事創作：使用學到的新詞做故事創作。 老師僅提醒拼字錯誤的部份、常見文法錯誤，盡量不做太多更動，讓孩子勇敢地寫故事。 **********孩子的書寫************** Old King Cole by Dale Old King Cole was happy because he saw a unicorn laughing. The queen smiled because she saw a dragon laughing. The Old King Cole laughed and I laughed because the Old King Cole was very very silly. He sat on the chair and he saw the joker. The Old King Cole laughed and laughed. I am sad because the Old King Cole was very noisy. The end.
作者小檔案： Anna 國小三年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：約兩年 故事創作背景：閱讀完Birthday Soup之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示拼字錯誤，保留孩子更多的原創性。 ******************************************************* Coco and I Written and Ilustrated by Anna One day my mother and I go to Coco's house. My mother talks to Coco's mother, and I play with Coco. Then Coco's mother and my mother go out but we don't know they go out. "Mommy! I am hungry," I called. My mom doesn't reply. I said to Coco, " We have the pot, water and some corns. We can make the soup. So we make the soap, and we eat the soup. Then my mom comes back and she said, "Let's go home!" I said, "Wait! I want to play." My mom said, "OK!" So we play pin the tail on the donkey. Then we go home. I said, "Oh, dear! I forgot my coat!" We go to Coco's house again. I get the coat. Then we go home. The end.
作者小檔案： Chip 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：兩年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完Birthday Soup之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示拼字錯誤，保留孩子更多的原創性。 ******************************************************* Polar Baear's Birthday Written and Illustrated by Chip Today is Polar Bear's Birthday, but he can't make a cake. Then he has an idea. He can make Birthday Cookies. He goes to the kitchen, but he forgets his friends will com. First, Moca comes in. He says, "Happy Birthday, Polar Bear!" "Oh!" says Polar Bear, "Do you want some cookies?" "OK! Thank you!" And Moca shuts his eyes to wait. Next Sleep Rabbit comes in. "Happy Birthday, Polar Bear!" he says. "Do you want some cookies?" says Polar Bear. "Thank you!" And he falls fast asleep. Next Rat comes in. "Happy Birthday, Polar Bear!" says Rat. "Do you want some cookies?" says Polar Bear. "OK!" says Rat and Rat take out a pot and he takes out a plate. They eat cookies and talk all the day. The end.
作者小檔案： Arielle 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：一年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完Birthday Soup之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示拼字錯誤，保留孩子的原創性。 ********************************** Go To Ashley's House Written and Illustrated by Arielle One day I eat my breakfast. "Oh! You forget to go to Ashley's house," my mom shouts. First, I call Ashley and tell her, "Now I will go to your house." Next, I ran to her house. "Wait! You forget to get your breakfast," shout my mom, so I get my breakfast and run to Ashley's house. I open the door and shut the door. I smell something good to eat. I see a big black pot, but there is nothing in the pot. Ashley comes home, and she goes to her room and says, "Shut your eyes, ok you can open your eyes." "Wow! Soup! It smells good," I shout. Ashley and I eat the soup. "Time to go home," I said. "I will never forget you, my friend." I said. At last I go home, and I am very happy today. The end.
作者小檔案： Arielle 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：一年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完What Wil Little Bear Wear?之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 ********************************** Jenny's Weekend Written by Arielle Illustrated by Arielle One day a girl is happy. Her name was Jenny. Today Jenny looked out the window. She saw snow. She was very cold. Then she put on the snow pants and a coat. But Jenny was cold again. So her mother made something for Jenny to put on. "Oh! A pair of socks and now I am not cold." Jenny's mom went to the shop. She bought the fur coat. "I think Jenny need this fur coat," said Jenny's mom. Jenny's mom went home. Jenny looked at the fur coat and shouted, "Wow! This coat was pretty! Now I have a pretty fur coat and I will not be cold erery day! Ya!" The end.
作者小檔案： Chip 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：兩年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完What Will Little Bear Wear?之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 ************************************** Polar Bear Written by Chip Illustrated by Chip One day Polar Bear makes an icehouse and takes his fur coat, snow pants to the icehouse. He wants to catch fish to eat, so he goes to the sea to catch some fish back to his icehouse, and he goes to sleep. The next day, he wonders why he has a pair of eyes, but he has no answer. One day he finds a book. It says, "All animals have two eyes because they can help us to see." Polar Bear says, "Hurray!" The end.
作者小檔案： Anna 國小三年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：約兩年 故事創作背景：閱讀完What Will Little Bear Wear?之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 **************************************************** Little Mouse Written by Anna Illustrated by Anna One day Little Mouse was cold. She put on her coat and a pair of snow pants. Then she made a strawberry cake. Little Mouse wanted to eat the strawberry cake. Mouse's mom said, "Ok!" Little Mouse cried, "Hurray!" She ate the cake. Then she went to sleep. The End.
作者小檔案： Arielle 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：一年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完Happy Birthday, Danny and the Dinosaur之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 ********************************** Jon's Birthday Written by Arielle Illustrated by Arielle Once upon a time, Petter was in a hurry. He had to see his friend. His name was Jon. Today is Jon's birthday. So Petter and I went to his house. I sat down on the furniture. Then Jon put a dish of big cake on the furniture. "I'm nine years old today," said Jon. We blew out the candles. "Happy birthday!" said Petter. Jon gave some cake to each friend. Jon's mother and father gave Jon a present. "Wow! A new T-shirt!" Jon shouted. Jon put on the new T-shirt. "How do I look?" asked Jon. "You look so cute!" said Petter. "Thank you," said Jon. "Do you want to play baseball?" asked Jon. "I would be delighted," said Petter. Petter and Jon were very happy. Petter hung up the ball the threw the ball. There is a CD player in Jon's house. "The CD player is a hundred million dollars," said Jon. "Wow!" shouted Petter. Hon turned on the CD player. And I covered my ears. At last, Petter had fun and he went home. The end.
作者小檔案： Chip 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：兩年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完Happy Birthday, Danny and the Dinosaur之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 ************************************** Owl's Pet Written by Chip Illustrated by Chip One day, Owl wants a pet. He wants his pet is a million years old and can help him hang up the balloons. So he goes to the pet shop. In the pet shop, he sees dogs, cats, lambs...and he sees a dinosaur. He asks the dinosaur, "Can you be my pet?" The dinosaur said," I will be delighted." So he buys the dinosaur. When they go home, Owl blows up the balloons and the dinosaur hangs up the balloons and they have a party. The end.
作者小檔案： Anna 國小三年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：約兩年 故事創作背景：閱讀完Happy Birthday, Danny and the Dinosaur之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 **************************************************** Happy Birthday! Written by Anna Illustrated by Anna Today is Coco's birthday. Everybody went to Coco's birthday party. Lala said,"There are so many furnitures in your house." Coco's mom gave each child a dish of fruit pie. Coco said,"It's time to eat the birthday cake." They sang the birthday song. Then Coco blew out the candles. They ate the birthday cake. Coco said," Let's play pin the tail on the donkey." They said,"Ok!" They played pin the tail on the donkey. They said,"We are delighted!" They went home. Then Coco is sad because nobody can play with her. The end.
作者小檔案： Anna 國小三年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：約兩年 故事創作背景：閱讀完Danny and the Dinosaur之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 **************************************************** Little Rabbit Written by Anna Illustrated by Anna Little Rabbit was a girl. Nobody liked Little Rabbit. Little Rabbit was sad. Little Rabbit wanted to go to a park. Then Little Rabbit went to a dog's house. Little Rabbit said, "Can you take me for a ride?" The dog said, "Ok! Hold on tight, Dog!" Little Rabbit was happy. Little Rabbit got on the dog. Then the dog ran very fast. Little Rabbit asked, " Do you have friends?" The dog said, "Yes! I have many friends!" Then they got to the park. Little Rabbit got off the dog. Then Little Rabbit said, "Thank you! Bye-bye!" Little Rabbit patted the dog. Then Little Rabbit saw her friends. Little Rabbit asked, "Can you play with me?" They said, "Ok!" Little Rabbit said, "Let's play hide and seek!" They asked, " How to play?" Little Rabbit said, " You hide and me find you." Then Little Rabbit covered her eyes. All her friends ran to hide. Little Rabbit made believe she can't find them. Little Rabbit said, "I give up." They were so happy. Then Little Rabbit said, "I have to go home." They said, "Good-bye, Little Rabbit!" Then Little Rabbit got back home. The end.
作者小檔案： Chip 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：兩年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完Danny and the Dinosaur之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 ************************************** Moca the Mouse Written by Chip Illustrated by Chip Once upon a time, there was a mouse, named Moca, and a cat, who lived inside a house. One day, the cat saw a sign. It said, "Cats always eat mice." But the cat thought, " Moca is my best friend. I can't eat him." Then he went back to his house and patted Moca. The next day, Moca asked the cat, " Do you want to eat cheese?" "Oh," said the cat, "nobody wants to eat that. Hey! Do you want a pet bird?" "Yes," said Moca. " Take me to the pet shop. Can you take me for a ride?" The cat said, " Ok! Hold on tight!" They went to the pet shop and bought a bird and put it in the mouse hole. They were very happy!
作者小檔案： Arielle 國小四年級 目前參加課程："故事與閱讀"每週2小時 跟著小蜜老師學習的時間：一年多 故事創作背景：閱讀完Danny and the Dinosaurs之後，運用故事裡讀到的新字來創作自己的故事。 批改故事原則：只提示較明顯的文法錯誤，盡量不更動太多，保留孩子的原創性。 ********************************** My Friend Written by Arielle My friend's name is Ashley. One day, Ashley and I went to the movie theater. I was very happy. She was very happy, too. Then we walked to my home. We went to the living room, and ate cookies. "Time to go home," said my mother. She said to Ashley, " I can take you for a ride." "Thank you," said Ashley. The next day, I ate breakfast. And then I ran to Ashley's house. We play hide and seek. She covered her eyes. I hid. I hid on a big sign. Nobody can find me. Ashley found me. "Oh," I said, "my goodness! You can climb on the sign." And we went to Ashley's house. Ashley's house has one dog. His name is Jon. " I make believe I can't hear what she said. And I can pretend she is out of sight," I said. Instead of me, Ashley went to her mom. At last, I went home and went to sleep. The End.
